More story openers…

I ran with a gun in my hand, scared to death, sometime stopping to listen to the very faint foot steps, not knowing where to go in the dark. Feeling the wall to guide me, I needed to get out. Then I saw some bright red eyes and a body like a dog. It illuminated bright green, what was it? A grey humanoid, paranormal life form! As the alien stood up I fired madly with the power of the gun.

By Vittorio

I was strolling down a battered street in the middle of Cheltenham at 1am. It was very dark and I could see the street light go on and off. My heart pounded fast, there was nobody except this old man who was about 80, he kept on staring like a statue…..

By Max


6 Responses to “More story openers…”

  1. 1 Miss Kavanagh October 9, 2011 at 15:07

    Wow, these openers are truly great – I’m gripped!

  2. 3 Cameron October 19, 2011 at 20:02

    great Vittorio

  3. 4 Cameron October 19, 2011 at 20:05

    awsome Max, I want to keep reading

  4. 5 Aust December 7, 2011 at 18:21

    great max and vick

  5. 6 travis March 9, 2012 at 19:40

    go max!!

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